8 thoughts on “Tanka #10”

1. Francina December 11, 2013 at 10:54 am

   simply beautiful Tanka,

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorDecember 15, 2013 at 10:23 am

      Thank you, Francina, as always. Blessings~

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2. m lewis redford December 11, 2013 at 10:14 am

   … [the last line] becoming their offering – I read it as that at first and then checked myself; I dunno

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorDecember 11, 2013 at 10:20 am

      Hmm. Interesting. I also had, in an earlier draft withholding their offering… Just one word.

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3. Raul Bucciarelli December 9, 2013 at 1:00 am

   Reblogged this on daisuzoku.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorDecember 15, 2013 at 8:54 am

      Thank you for such a gift. Be well~

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4. pi314chron December 8, 2013 at 2:58 pm

   Not quantity but quality…

   Your #10 shows all of us how to do it right. Striking in its stark simplicity.

   Ron

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorDecember 8, 2013 at 3:06 pm

      Thank you for this gift, Ron. I wish you well~

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