10 thoughts on “Tanka #4”

1. typewriterpoet March 2, 2013 at 12:24 am

   this is lovely sometimes you need that extra line or two to set the scene and you made good use of it in this tanka.

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2. purehaiku February 5, 2013 at 7:26 am

   I love the peace and calmness on this site

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorFebruary 5, 2013 at 8:30 am

      I appreciate your visit and comment. I am so glad you have found something here that resonates. Be well~

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3. pujakins February 3, 2013 at 11:09 pm

   Yes, nice. Photo and words very like each other. Warmly, Tasha

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4. angie werren February 3, 2013 at 1:15 pm

   beautiful.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorFebruary 3, 2013 at 1:25 pm

      Angie – Thank you for your visit and your comment. I love your work, it means a lot. Be well~

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5. eparkperry February 3, 2013 at 9:45 am

   Oh my goodness, there is so much beauty in your words. I am also working on surrendering to the moment. It is amazing how peace opens when we allow whatever is present to simply be. Thank you for sharing such a simple, yet profound moment in time.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorFebruary 3, 2013 at 11:28 am

      Thank you for visiting and for your heartfelt comment – it is a gift. I’ll look forward to you coming again and wish you well on your path. Blessings~

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6. grevilleacorner February 2, 2013 at 10:49 pm

   Perhaps alone rather than lonely…. 🙂

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorFebruary 3, 2013 at 8:16 am

      Perhaps it depends on the moment… Be well friend, and thank you as always for visiting~

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