8 thoughts on “Summer Haiku #2”

1. Matthew August 25, 2013 at 8:38 am

   You just perfectly described the scene out of my bedroom window last night. Beautiful. Tiny perfections in that haiku.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorAugust 25, 2013 at 9:19 am

      Thanks Matthew. I am going to miss having the windows open when the season changes… Be well~

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2. bluebrightly August 24, 2013 at 10:54 pm

   I love the unexpected way this puts two different sense together.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorAugust 25, 2013 at 9:19 am

      Thank you so much – there was a lot going on for a quiet, still moment… Be well~

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3. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart August 24, 2013 at 10:32 pm

   Lovely. 🙂

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorAugust 25, 2013 at 9:18 am

      Thank you – the moment was, too. Be well~

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4. skyraftwanderer August 24, 2013 at 5:59 pm

   Love the use of “withering”. Great imagery also.

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   1. bussokuseki Post authorAugust 25, 2013 at 9:17 am

      Thank you, it is a great word that carries a lot of images and meaning… Thank you for reading and commenting. Be well~

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