
the shallow stream skirts
softened edges of a field —
emptiness surrounds
steady retreat on a path
through morning grey and stillness

the shallow stream skirts
softened edges of a field —
emptiness surrounds
steady retreat on a path
through morning grey and stillness
Nicely said, nicely pictured, Thank you. BTW if you see your friend who just left Word Press with a good by, please tell him for me that I so enjoyed his postings and regret his departure. Warm Wishes, Tasha
Thank you, Tasha, as always. Now I’ll have to be off to find that friend…
Lovely words and image. Thanks.
Thank you so much – that means a great deal to me. Be well~
capturing the subtlety of nature is a tricky art. well done!
Thank you so much for saying so and for your visit. Be well this day~
your tanka makes the coldest winter warm to the eye
Thank you so much – it is a beautiful season. Be well~
Thanks for stopping by to comment on my blog. It gave me a chance to find this lovely poem and photo. The picture of the stream reminds me of one at the back of the field on the farm where I grew up in Ohio. What a sweet nostalgia for me. Thanks.
I am so glad that you could find something meaningful here. Thank you for returning the visit and taking the time to share your thoughts – it is always a gift. Be well~
That’s just superb!
Thank you so much, Seb, I appreciate the compliment. Be well~
Lovely 🙂
Thank you, I appreciate the visit and the compliment. Be well~
Beautiful words, beautiful photograph.
Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Be well this day~