12 thoughts on “Tanka #2

  1. eikenlaan

    I love the colour of rust and the cold and whiteness of snow combined resting on cracks, taking a pause on life to just view the day. Very calm and mindful write. đŸ™‚ Maire

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    1. bussokuseki Post author

      It was my pleasure, I loved that piece you wrote tonight – quite striking in its simplicity. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Be well~

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  2. maryamchahine

    Something that is commonplace like rust and cracks is made profound! Very beautiful way with words : )

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    1. bussokuseki Post author

      Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I deeply appreciate your words. If we can only slow down enough, many more things become profound… Be well~

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    1. bussokuseki Post author

      Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment – I am so happy to hear that you like it. All the best for the new year for you as well~

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    1. bussokuseki Post author

      Thank you for saying so. The visual caught my eye, thankfully I had my camera, and I knew there was a poem in there somewhere…

      Thanks agin for visiting and commenting. Be well~

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    1. bussokuseki Post author

      Thank you! I was trying to pay closer attention to the form, with the turning line in the middle…A bit of a challenge, but I really like the form. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Be well~

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