Rust and fallen snow
rest upon cracks and fissures
revealed by soft light,
confirmation of failure
weathered by time’s measured grace.
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bussokuseki 
I love the colour of rust and the cold and whiteness of snow combined resting on cracks, taking a pause on life to just view the day. Very calm and mindful write. 🙂 Maire
Thank you so much for visiting and for such a thoughtful response – how wonderful! Be well~
Very nice, thanks so much for stopping by my blog
It was my pleasure, I loved that piece you wrote tonight – quite striking in its simplicity. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Be well~
Something that is commonplace like rust and cracks is made profound! Very beautiful way with words : )
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I deeply appreciate your words. If we can only slow down enough, many more things become profound… Be well~
such a beautiful and “quiet” poem, an inspiration for me…!
i wish you a happy new year and all the best!
renée
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment – I am so happy to hear that you like it. All the best for the new year for you as well~
Absolutely beautiful.
Thank you for saying so. The visual caught my eye, thankfully I had my camera, and I knew there was a poem in there somewhere…
Thanks agin for visiting and commenting. Be well~
beautiful Tanka!
Thank you! I was trying to pay closer attention to the form, with the turning line in the middle…A bit of a challenge, but I really like the form. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Be well~